Posted: August 6, 2010 in Lines

I carry an untouchable dream

as I began to walk alone…

While singing a tune for the feeling I’ve left behind!

The cold rain falls down from the sky…

I want to forget

While wavering my heart stinks

I’m shapeless…

That’s why I cherish it!

  1. Priom says:

    we are not alone. we are together but so unknown. our surroundings shape us but too many of us dare to be bent out of shape.
    great write up 🙂

  2. It feels cold when you feel you are missing something…! ‘n “shapeless”?! It’s because I maybe am in a crowd but I always feel when I’m in a crowd I’m all alone…all by myself…they maybe can see me…but I feel shapeless…invisible!! 🙂

  3. Farah says:

    U know wat I loved most here…The part “The cold”. carry …dream”!! Normally I love rain ‘n hardly think it’s cold!! but here it felt prefect when u read them with earlier lines 🙂
    Just one thing,why did use the word “shapeless”?

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